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A Lucario Change

One afternoon, two friends were sitting on a bench. They were talking about something very important...

"Are you for real, Peter?" Jim asked.

Peter smiled. "Of course I am... I just got my import copy of Brawl," he said proudly.

"Man, you need to let me try it... I have been waiting forever to play that game," Jim said, barely containing his excitement.

Peter laughed. "Easy, dude. I haven't played the game yet. Just let me play it for a little bit, and then I'll give you the possibility to play it."

Jim sighed. "How cruel..."

Peter smiled. "Yeah, some people tell me that."

Jim stood up. "Well, can you at least show me the game? I won't play it, I just want to watch... pleeeeeeeeease?"

Peter sighed. "Okay fine, come with me."


"Here we are," Peter said. while opening the door of his house.

Jim started to look around. He had never been to Peter's place before, and what he saw was truly unexpected. Peter definitely liked dragons. There were a lot of dragon-related objects, such as cards, statues, posters, games, movies and so on.

"Great collection!" Jim said.

"Thanks... I spent a lot of time finding all the rarest pieces," Peter said while turning on his TV.
Jim sat down on a chair. "Compared to your dragon collection... my stamp collection looks like a joke."
Peter stopped, the Brawl CD in his hands. "Stamps?

Jim gulped. "Well... you know... I... oh, whatever. Why don't you start the damn game?"
"Huh? Oh, right... sorry, but the stamp thing was a little..."

Jim sighed. "Okay, whatever. I collect stamps... but it's just my hobby, I don't even take it seriously."
Peter turned on the console. "You *should* take it seriously... you can earn a lot of money by selling it. You always say that you don't have money."

"Hey! I don't want to sell it... and by the way, a collection is something that you do for yourself. It's not something that you want to sell," Jim said almost angrily.

Peter grabbed the controller, ready to start the game. "Okay, now shut up... the game is starting..."


Almost six hours later, the two friends were still there in front of the TV. Peter was trying to unlock Lucario, his favorite character of the game, and Jim was doing his best to support him... with words, obviously.

"Come on, Peter, don't give up... we're so close," Jim said.

"You mean... *I* am close... this is *my* game you know" Peter said, maximum concentration.
And finally, twenty minutes later, Lucario was finally unlocked, and ready to be used. Peter stood up, and he kissed his right hand. "Oh, yeah... I'm the best!" he said.

Jim sighed. "I guess many people managed to unlock him faster than you."

Peter snored. "Oh, whatever, now it's unlocked, that's all that matters." Peter looked at his watch. "Well, time to take a break, my eyes hurt."

Jim stood up. "Can I play?"

Peter laughed. "Are you crazy? The console can't take it anymore. It will probably blow up as soon as you start playing."

Jim sighed. "Of course... damn."

Peter patted him on the shoulder. "Don't worry, tomorrow I will let you play, I promise."
Jim smiled. "Okay... thanks buddy."

Peter went to the fridge and took out two beers. "By the way... don't call me buddy," he said.
While giving Jim the beer, Peter noticed something on his right hand, something that looked fur. That was strange, but Peter decided to ignore it...there was nothing to worry least, not yet.


That night, Peter had a dream.

He was standing in the middle of a room with a giant mirror in front of him. He could see the human Peter, smiling at him. But when he looked at his hands... he realized, that the mirror was lying. His hands had only three fingers and a thumb each, and there was black fur on them. And there was also a sharp white spike on the back of his hand.

Confused and scared, Peter punched the mirror, which shattered in front of him, and the fragments felt on the floor, slowly starting to reflect his true self...

When Peter woke up, he was sweating. The dream scared him... it looked incredibly real.
"This is not possible... it's just a dream," Peter said to himself, while standing up.

He walked into the kitchen and drank a few glasses of water. After that, he returned to his bedroom and he crawled under the sheets.

He didn't notice that his eyes had changed color...


The following morning, the sound of the doorbell brought Peter back to the real world. "I'm coming, give me a second!" Peter yelled while jumping off the bed and grabbing his clothes.

He quickly went to the front door, and he opened it. Obviously, it was Jim.

"Jim? it's six in the morning?" Peter said.

Jim laughed. "Dude... it's two in the afternoon... check your clock"

Peter yawned. "Really? Well... I was sleeping."

"Definitely. You played Brawl too much, that's why. Today it's my turn!" Jim said, quickly running inside.

Peter sighed. "Maybe he's right..." he said, recalling the strange dream from the previous night.
Peter went in the living room, where Jim was already starting the game. He decided to eat something, while looking at him playing Brawl. It was not the most interesting thing to do, but he had nothing better to do anyway.

He started cooking some eggs with orange juice and bacon. While cooking, he noticed that the black fur was still growing on the back of his hand. And there was something else, something that looked like an old wound...a white circle, with no fur on it.

"The dream..." Peter said, both confused and worried. "Coincidences... these kinds of things don't happen in real life... Time to wake up, Peter... time to..."

"Who are you talking to?" Jim asked, pausing the game.

Peter turned around. "I was just..."

"Peter! What the hell happened to your eyes?!" Jim almost yelled.

Peter used a spoon to look at himself. Jim was right, something *had* happened to his eyes. They were red. And he also noticed that the black fur was growing on his face too.

Jim looked at the friend. "Peter, what's going on?"

Peter looked at his hands. He was trembling. "I... I don't know... I'm...changing"

That was it. Whatever magic was transforming Peter's body reacted to his words, and the full power of the transformation spell was unleashed.

With a loud crack, two sharp spines grew where the white wounds were. The fur started to grow even faster than before and Peter's entire body started to hurt.

"Peter... what..." Jim tried to say, unable to look away.

Peter couldn't talk. He was too shocked. He looked at his middle fingers, which vanished into thin air, and the other fingers, quickly changing position according to the new structure.

With another loud crack, Peter's shoulders became larger, and the black fur covered them as well.
A shiny whitish-yellow fur started to grow on his chest, and at the same time, with yet another loud crack, a big white spine grew from his chest.

His legs became larger, and blue and black fur covered them. It was like the fur was becoming some sort of... cloth. His feet drastically changed. Two toes vanished, just like the middle fingers of his hands. The black fur covered them, and then they became larger.

One last thing was left... Peter's head... the final part of the transformation.

His nose lengthened, transforming Peter's face into a muzzle. Black and blue fur grew on his new muzzle, creating the trademark Lucario mask. His ears became pointed, and they grew larger... covered by blue fur. And finally, his hair fell off... the transformation was complete.

Peter's clothes fell on the floor. In that moment, Jim was standing in front of a real-life Lucario... something that had to be seen to be believed.

Jim stepped forward. "Peter… is that... you?" he asked.

Surprisingly, Peter smiled. "Yes... it's me."

Jim was confused. "Are you... okay?"

"Yes..." Peter said happily. "To be honest...this is the best moment of my life!"

Jim stepped back. "Wait a second... you just transformed into a Lucario, a creature that exists only in people's fantasies... and now you are telling me that you are happy?"

Peter grabbed Jim's arm. "Yes... I like this body... it makes me feel... powerful. This body goes beyond the human limits, I feel like I can do whatever I want... I feel... free!"

"...really?" Jim asked, starting to get interested.

Peter raised his paw. "Just watch."

A blue sphere of psychic power appeared over his paw. Jim stepped back, both amazed and scared. Peter quickly made the sphere disappear.

"Is this enough for you? Or do you want me to kick something?" Peter asked.

"No... that's okay... now that you showed me that... I... I want to try this too... how can I transform?" Jim asked, strangely euphoric.

"Well..." Peter looked around. He quickly spotted the Brawl CD case on the table. "I guess...that the game transformed me... because I played it so much,"

Jim gulped. "That store sells transformation copies of Brawl?"

Peter sighed. "Actually... I didn't buy it from a shop... I bought him from a guy on DeviantArt... he said he didn't like the game and he wanted to sell it,"

Jim raised his eyebrow. "And who is it?"

Peter turned around. "His name... is..."
With the release of Super Smash Brothers Brawl...I decided to take this old =werechu request, and use it for this story :)

Now...who wants a special copy? ;)
(don't take this seriously)

EDIT: Uploaded an improved version, thanks Shadowlugia249 for the fixing :P
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TheTFApprentice Featured By Owner Edited Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist
Who is the guy from DeviantArt in the story?! I HAVE TO KNOW!!
Freddy521 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Writer
Ben! Why do you keep doing this to people!
Jonago97 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
His name is... BEN300!!! Lol
thevorelover313162 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this story seems like something one might find on the creepypasta website, a mysterious game someone finds off of the internet, the person transforming, i dunno thats just my opinion 
DevilWolfKiller Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015
Lol it's you can I buy one?? :{
DevilWolfKiller Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015
I meant to post dat ^
DragonTamer108 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
damn limit of words...wait...there is none
I would get one copy of the original game and one TF version.I play the original, and when friends come over, LUCARIO TIME MUDDA***AS
UltimateChaoss Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
of course, almost anyone would want one :3
Ruhcoon Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I want one. :)
SkirmisherDak Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow that was awesome!
I'd totally play that copy...too bad my copy doesn't do that in real life...
friedcheese22 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
i know right
aboloniguy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
same here.
Lucario21223 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
WolfeofChaos Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
darklightlunkun Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i'd take one quickly
Daniel-D-S Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Student Writer
Dude can you give me a pc copy i wanna be a lugia
sonicfanrc Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
dang it were woud i get my hands on that
Redbox9283 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student Writer
I want one!
Redbox9283 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student Writer
I want one!
RioRiolu12 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
I'd buy one of those copies for all my college funds! (Not like I'd need them after transforming.)
megaman234 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist
DragonBoy387 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Student Writer
ShadowLugia 249 helped on this? Sweet.
I can't believe he's banned. T_T
Elicario Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010   Writer
ben you put all the fun in tfs. peac!!!
SkirmisherDak Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awsomeness! that was an asome story! if only it wee true....
JeremyEr10 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
I'd have a copy for $60 dollars please!!!
Ilovevore1 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Superstar2702 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How would he notice his eyes had changed colour...?:confused:
bronzewolf78 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
man i would like a copy...
Sam4765 Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
Damn i want a copy XD
Katanadan Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
Me too.
It really is a shame
golferdude666 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
TF copy! Must have! Nice story. :D
dracologistmaster Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Student Writer
great story
pmctitles Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
so bad shadowlugia249 got suspended... what did he do wrong?
ben300 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Apparently plaguerism
golferdude666 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
I, too am miffed about the fact that he was suspended. I have spent a lot of time, DAYS collectively, looking for every one of his stories. I really wish DA would release his ban and notify him of said release. I have faved at least 30 deviations of his.
Starman609 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
you do that you can check out his 2 other sites that he goes on; furaffinaty, and he has been upload some new stoies before
SuperGokuV Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2009
I have the game, but I would rather have that copy. A very interesting story. If only I could write as good as you, and I speak the language.
KHKYLE2 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2009
i have been a real life lucario, help of hypnosis and ssbb
Fleskywood Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
who hypnotized ya?
silver851 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
i want 1
lucario is my fav pokemon
Lauren-hime Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2009
Can I have a copy? Can I? Pleaseeee...
Great story. I'd buy the Wii and the game if I knew the result :D
Theghostsoldier Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008
Great Story...wish that was in real life, but what can you do. Hmmm, I wonder what will happen in the sequel ( If there is a sequel).*Starts thinking that the TF Lucario goes over to the sellers house and "asks" for another copy for his classmate*
Eternal-Equinox Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2008
Tell me his name!
ben300 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
secret ;)
Gryfffalconheart Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2008
excellent work. a little list-ish, but really cool.
now if only i had that game...
ben300 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gryfffalconheart Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2008
btw... i still cant figure out how to get emoticons ito my comments
ben300 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DA got a list ;)
Gryfffalconheart Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2008
ben300 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The classic ones are (with no spaces!!!):

: )
; )
: lol:
: wow:
: D
: nod:
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